140.Some items (such as clothes or furniture) can be made by hand or by machine. Which do you prefer — items made by hand or items made by machine? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.
Certainly one of the most important aspects in choosing a cloth or furniture is the method of making it. Method of making a product is crucial because it effect directly on the final product. There are to ways for making a product, making by hand and by machine. All in all, each of them has special characters and properties. Some people prefer to use hand made materials and have good reasons for doing that, on the other hand majority of people including me prefer machine made items. It seems to me that, having cheaper price, convenience and saving time in flourishing, in addition high quality ...
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