Advantages and disadvantages of internet

Internet has made people's life easier than lot before. Digital communication, instant messaging, social sites, email are the advantages of the internet while threat in security, personal data decryption, cyber crime are its missue.

Talking about day to day life internet has role in every aspect such as business, education, health. In corporate world people can send all the business related documents via email, students can learn using internet and expand their knowledge also we can know about different health issue and find prevention. In addition, communication has been more easy and convienient with the use of internet.

Despite the advantages of internet culprit can access to people personal data which is the biggest threat. Advancement in technology has also given rise in the differnet vulnerable cyber crime which can lead to leakage of people's personal data, access to other banks account, unauthorized text. Recent survey in America by cyber security and manganet showed that 8 out of 10 account is in risk of malware and near about 80% personal computer are affected via unauthorized emails, lmessage and differnet web pages.

To sum up, advancement of internet has made digital communication easy and convienient, saving time and energy, simplefied work while it has also given rise to differnet security threat which can misuse people's personal data. There is also developlmet of Anti-Malware software which can prevent people's personal data.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to use'.
Suggestion: to use
...documents via email, students can learn using internet and expand their knowledge als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, in addition, such as, talking about, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43668122271 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75505363845 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598253275109 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4397220377 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160020021631 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810105049702 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695865475374 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112423306594 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607189083284 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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