Some people believe playing games is good for children.other suppose that is not.what do you think?
Nowadays modern video gain popularity in our life and it is one of the issues of public concerns .some people believe that playing game is does more harm than good to users.others suppose that this activity offer many benefits to users.i believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
On the other hand,playing computer games can be both entertaining and educational.players are transported into virtual words that bring more exhilirating than real life past times.from an educational perpectives these games encourage imagination and creativity as well as concentration,logical thinking and problem sloving .more important it has been shown that computer game help to prepare them for real work tasks such as flying a plane.
However i would agrue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.game can be highly addictive because many people and children in particular now spend many hours each day trying to progress through the levels of game or to get a higher scores than their friends.this leads lack of sleep to problem at school, assignment is scrasified for a few hours on the computer or console.the rise in obesity recently has also been linked with lack of exercise and often accompany game addiction.
To sum up..playing game does more harm than good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, in particular, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1961722488 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08490387942 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.972926648 49.4020404114 348% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.5 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.25 20.7667163134 252% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.25 7.06120827912 329% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245707337607 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145163432802 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479180834959 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145163432802 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479180834959 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.0946893788 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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