The Issue whether Corporations have responsibility towards society and environment is a contentious one. I believe corporations should obey law and try to make as much money as possible. Because unless corporation make profit, the development is going to halt. Also, if rules and regulation is provided wisely and make corporations follow the rules then both society and corporation can prosper.
First, main goal of a corporation is to earn money. If it focuses on social development, then its primary goal of making money will hamper. Which may lead to destruction of that corporation. For example, big technology company like Facebook, Google is creating advanced technology for us. To create advanced technology, lots of money needs to be invested. If these company focus on social and environmental development, then they might lose their profit and eventually it will hamper their investment in developing higher technology. So, corporations main focus should be making profit not on social development.
Second, if we can impose proper rules and regulations on corporations then we can force them to promote the wellbeing of society and environment. For example, Big manufacturing industry like car companies produce lots of carbon di oxide every day. If we make laws that these company which emit huge amount of CO2 in the environment have to plant trees which produce equal amount of oxygen, then we can prevent greenhouse effect. Again, we can restrict different manufacturing companies to emit industrial wastage to atmosphere and river water by creating strict rules. This in terns will help shaping a better society and environment. So creating prudent laws and regulation can be one way of making corporation invest towards betterment of society and environment.
On the other hand, some people believe that corporation should take responsibility towards society and environment on its own. But the problem with that notion is that which corporation should promote how much is a big question. Again if there are no clear rules and regulation then corporation will not get any guidance how to act for the development of society and environment. For example, we expect big oil companies to invest more to environmental cause. Because they are the one destroying. On the other hand, renewable energy companies should have less burden of ruining our ecology, thus should pay less to social and environmental development. But if we let these company decide for themselves how much they contribute toward society then there is a change that big company which are hampering our environment decide to invest nothing for our society and environment.
In conclusion, even though some people believe that corporations have some responsibility toward society and environment, I believe that if laws and regulation is properly imposed then both society and corporations can be benefited
- TPO-1-integrated writing 3
- As we acquire more knowledge things do not become more comprehensible but more complex and mysterious 33
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 16
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 50
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...imary goal of making money will hamper. Which may lead to destruction of that corpora...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
... lots of money needs to be invested. If these company focus on social and environmental devel...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...ing higher technology. So, corporations main focus should be making profit not on social d...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
...i oxide every day. If we make laws that these company which emit huge amount of CO2 in the en...
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Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to shape' or 'shape'.
Suggestion: to shape; shape
...g strict rules. This in terns will help shaping a better society and environment. So cr...
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Line 7, column 461, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to invest more to environmental cause. Because they are the one destroying. On the oth...
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Line 7, column 668, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
...nvironmental development. But if we let these company decide for themselves how much they con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2445.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35010940919 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04592042037 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448577680525 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.933588132 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.28 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288667243535 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895243509666 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901519516305 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201746339696 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984280003754 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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