No, I disagree with the proposed statement surely, because working hastily cannot lead to the progress or improvement. I think we should focus on our works and professions to do it as well. Although the speed is more important in nowadays such as electronic industries, people should be cautious in their works because of the following reasons:
First, as the people speed up their works without sufficient cautious, they will make mistakes and so it just means not only those works won't be completed but also, there exists twice works which should be done. First, they ought to fix the following failures and after that redo the works.
Second, working fast does not mean that the work was done perfectly. If the CEOs of companies forced their employees to work fast without any program, they really want to satisfy their bosses and so won't care about their own works. For example, the Volkswagen company in the competence with other automobile industries forced their employees to work hard to get the more profits and cheated its customers with low-quality vehicles. So instead of getting profit Wolfswagen lost much of its investments on the new cars.
Finally, I think people should enjoy their life also their vocation. I mean if the people work quickly and don't care about their own life they lose some irreversible times which they could play with their children or enjoy watching television and so on. Therefore instead of non-stop working I suggest, we can enjoy our life and also work together more efficiently.
So, working hastily can be harmful as the probable mistakes can waste the time and also decrease quality. Also, it burns some beautiful time which we cannot recover it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...l. Although the speed is more important in nowadays such as electronic industries, people s...
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Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... I mean if the people work quickly and dont care about their own life they lose som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i mean, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97543859649 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46765222007 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.6314419062 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.076923077 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179256133976 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681556390917 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509575641445 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109255045492 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456519301876 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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