One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is to see a colossal upsurge in the behaviour of the human because of the binding laws. There is a widespread worry that people will do illegal and inhuman activities which will affect the life cycle of all the natural things. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious considerations.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one lies in the fact that people get frightened of being fined or punished. In fact, not only do humans run their life smoothly but also they help to keep the life of other creatures peaceful and safe. We can find overwhelming evidence in support of the fact that the binding laws have helped in changing the thinking aspect of human. Needless to say, all these merits stand any country in good stead, as far as positive factors are considered.
Moreover, another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the human has the fear of losing their goodwill in the society. Besides, the peacefulness of the country is not a hundred percentage controlled by the law, the societies culture also play a vital role. For example, there are a number of researches by various governmental bodies that show that country like Australia having strict rules and regulations is able to reduce the number of crimes. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of the strict laws of their country.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of laws changing human behaviour are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76136363636 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64501096198 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2650750364 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.75 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177765615961 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574979130837 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412388013835 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106173098149 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218194176079 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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