Globalization is most commonly used term in this twenty-first century. Now, it is said that world will be a global village with single government, currency, language and judiciary. Here, both merits and demerits will be scrutinised in upcoming paragraphs.
Admittedly, world as a global village has multifarious benefits. Firstly, single goverment mean's no geographical borders, without any tension of wars, world will be a peaceful place to live in. Denizens can enjoy every right despite of any discrimination. To illustrate, students can study anywhere and teachers will be unbiased. Moreover, if world will be monolingual, people will get more chance to travel, they can explore more, do experiments and get new experiences. Individuals will have more opportunities for employment. Thus, single global village will make this world peaceful place to live in.
On the other hand, only dominant language will survive, while rest off minor languages will vanish. All the rich literature, written in local languages, will be lost. People will have only one culture which will be dull and boaring. For instance, there are many countries famous for their diversity that will not be there. Futheremore, whole world will be difficult to controll by single goverment. There can be roits for reservation of seats in parliament and single judiciary will have numerous of cases. So, it can turn into administrative failure. Hence, negative side of this trend can be heavy on positive.
In conclusion, globalization have many adventages, but it cannot turn world into single global village, without hardships. So, it has both plus and minus points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35907335907 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91426259319 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4357129277 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0526315789 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6315789474 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450754020617 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145938255071 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11354064376 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284673802079 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079025425311 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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