The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climate.

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The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climate.

The given lines represented reavles about information by warm climate's of winter climate day and night .The data is represent in addion . It is clear and cheorently represent.
Overall,It is evident that cool climate ,and warm climate this we can safe from sun heat with home.
It can seen that we should need of building material for heat storage it shoudh high angle roof as well as for covering Isolation in the house should be thermal building material after that window because came in house sun of heat.
Apart from it is warm climate reflective roof material moreover in this shoudh be insulation as well as it should be roof overhangs for shade in the house windows closed and covered it is for day .further to night ventilation for stored heat removed in night time windows be open because air can past in house.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...climates of winter climate day and night .The data is represent in addion . It i...
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...limates of winter climate day and night .The data is represent in addion . It is...
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...mates of winter climate day and night .The data is represent in addion . It is cl...
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Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
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Suggestion: represented
...ter climate day and night .The data is represent in addion . It is clear and cheorently...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... night .The data is represent in addion . It is clear and cheorently represent. ...
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Line 2, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...night .The data is represent in addion . It is clear and cheorently represent. ...
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...clear and cheorently represent. Overall,It is evident that cool climate ,and warm ...
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... Overall,It is evident that cool climate ,and warm climate this we can safe from s...
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...n safe from sun heat with home. It can seen that we should need of building materia...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...age it shoudh high angle roof as well as for covering Isolation in the house shou...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'roofed'?
Suggestion: roofed
...h be insulation as well as it should be roof overhangs for shade in the house window...
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...windows closed and covered it is for day .further to night ventilation for stored ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73611111111 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39404731461 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8681578229 43.030603864 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.4 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178174762959 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810972717496 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635363439943 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100833333989 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553828954141 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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