People enjoy spending time with fellow students or co-workers because they understand us. However, I agree that being together with those at a higher level can lead to an efficient way of learning things. Someone can measure the pros and cons consciously.
First, teachers or supervisors are wealthier than those at the same level so following them intrigues people to seek for countless money. A case in point is a report about that the closet five friends around a person make a big part of his income. Supervisors usually have high paying jobs, more than sixteen thousand a month and they live a high standard of life such as flying abroad every two weeks for travel. Their rosy life is an incentive for people to look up to. Then further, people are easy to be influenced and follow them working hard to gain a higher level of pay.
Second, there is no doubt that those at a higher level has more empathy. I think my high school teacher is a good example of this. Miss Wu, she was both a Chinese and a mental teacher when I happened to face teenage anxiety when young. In the time, I stuck into the depression of always worrying about my appearance and it was she that lighted up my life. Miss Wu listened to my complain and showed me various people of different age, rate, weight. This gives me an opportunity to learn something new about myself and embrace the whole of me.
Thirdly, elderly people have an overall perspective on living and can help people solve their serious mental problem. For instance, my friend Joe, who is an engineer of internet data center, has advised me on how to sleep. He says that sleeping is not only within 11 pm to 7 am, which means I shouldn’t imprison myself in the concept of absolute sleeping time. In the other word, I put too much stress on forcing me to sleep at night. Instead, I change my way to study when I can not fall asleep. This truly helps me release and forgive my guilt for not sleeping well.
To conclude, those who own a higher level, such as teachers, my friend Joe, and people who earn a high level of pay are friends that we can learn from them. As the mental teacher, they are able to bring us to a more interesting lifestyle.
- dinosaurs endotherm 75
- People learn things better from those at their own level- such as fellow students or co workers- than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 96
- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 86
- life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparent were children. 83
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49502487562 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3958426758 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587064676617 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7041137149 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1363636364 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287025079683 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726818575972 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906748097523 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168660588403 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839385802291 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.