You have planned to study a distance course online from an international university. Write a letter to the university officer requesting information about the course. In your letter, write: ● Why you are writing
● Which course it is and when you plan to study
● Why you want to study this course
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing this letter to enquire about an online distance course that I would like to pursue from Minnesota University. University Website helped me to get your contact to know Information about the course which I want to opt.
Lately, I have been searching for the best University that can provide a distance online course of Data Analytics and Science and came across your University website. I would be grateful if you could let me know that I can start the course from October this Year, as my work load and pressure will be less at that point of time. Also, I would like to know the process of enrolling and how the classes and tests will be arranged thought out the course period. It would be really helpful if you can send a detailed mail about this information I am requesting for.
I am a Software professional working as Data analyst in a reputed Company. My Domain involves work with Data science and analysis and with gaining experience, I would be needing more exposure and knowledge to have an enhancing career. Hope your University can be able to provide me the knowledge I would like to gain. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Gowthami Tirakala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter to enquire ...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...is and with gaining experience, I would be needing more exposure and knowledge to have an ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70754716981 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58484971018 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2878762533 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7272727273 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27155356653 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102158131233 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793638108361 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202675913354 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108764265512 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.