Dear Sir,
I am one of the students by name John, pursuing MCA 3rd semester from your college. I am writing this letter to get to your notice about some of the issues that need to be resolved at the earliest.
I am the regular customer of the canteen having two meals a day. The food so delicious and served in clean and hygienic plates. I also observe that the servers of the canteen always wear head caps and polythin gloves to hands. The price of the food is much affordable and almost all of the students have their meal here.
However, there are some simple issues that need some attention. I noticed that there are no enough waste trays where the remaining can be dumped. As per my understanding, an increase in the waste tray can resolve this issue. Besides, I suggest placing some small dustbins will increase the neatness and can make more hygienic. Some of the water taps are not working and making the students queue for washing hands.
Apart from the above issues, our canteen makes itself unique in serving the students a healthy and fresh eatable food. The above-mentioned mending is necessary to be addressed otherwise which ruins the place.
Looking forward to hearing from you sir.
yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...this letter to get to your notice about some of the issues that need to be resolved at the ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...need to be resolved at the earliest. I am the regular customer of the canteen ...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... the food is much affordable and almost all of the students have their meal here. Howev...
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...he neatness and can make more hygienic. Some of the water taps are not working and making t...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ing forward to hearing from you sir. yours faithfully, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, look, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78139534884 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3998197156 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2634122794 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.5333333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158574153445 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484800042468 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564427471984 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821001130551 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550983426275 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.