In this era of technology , Science has achirved many milestones . Growth of electronic gadgets become changed the leisure time of children. technology helps the child in every field.
Their are plathero of advantages , Primilaey inventions like mobile phones , computers and television privides the enaromous knowledge regarding education and current affairs. Moreover,these inventions are nanny for children.it also saves child from does crime outside the home .in addition, child surf different kinds of websites , gain knowledge foreigner langoage and culture. juvinile also helps parents to buy online product .child also solve his assessment and queries regarding every topic .technology play vital role nowadays, for development of the country.Apart from that , child also gain knowledge about its history how people survive in past period of time. Child also play education games which enhances the ability to do any work .
On flip side ,technolgy also has garmful effects . Firstly, sitting prolong front if tv, mobile phones causes obesity .obese child doesnot do any work properly . Moreover, child becomes cought patao, he doesn't do any physical exercise and loss of education.child also promotes juviniledelequency which is harmful for future. Child also cause eyesight and skin problems . He also know about how do crime happen and try to do . Many action movies gives bad impact on children's mind .
In the epilogue, parents guidance is impotant for children's development. Child also gives less time to use electronoc gadfets.pratice physical exercise for strong bodt posture.
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- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in European countries in 1979 to 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparision where relevant. 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65546218487 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92957334778 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663865546218 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.6363889548 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129417970421 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524894341447 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404353747667 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989682443166 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596965165536 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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