The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates how much 3 bakeries in London earned on a year basis over a decade from 2000 to 2010.
Overall, while there’s a substantial and regular increase in the annual wages of Robie’s Bakery and Bemie’s Bun, the revenue of Lovely Loaves fluctuated and fell drastically and its highest position was replaced by Robbie’s Bakery, which experienced the fastest growth, in the final year.
In 1990, Lovely Loaves earned 80000 pounds; meanwhile, the receipts of Robie’s Bakery and Bemie’s Bun were just nearly 60000 and 20000 pounds respectively. In 2006, the figures for Robbie’s Bakery rose slightly to 60000 pounds after stabilizing for 50 years and that for Bemie’s Bun had reached a plateau at just under 40000 pounds. Following the reverse pattern, from 1990 to 2006, Lovely Loaves witnessed a significant decline in the yearly incomes to less than 60000 pounds except a recover to approximately 90000 pounds in 2004.
By 2007, Robbies’s Bakery had surpassed Lovely Loaves and became the bakery with the highest wages (about 65000 pounds). From then, the statistics of Bemie’s Bun and Robbie’s Bakery surged to over 60000 pounds and more than 100000 thousands by agreement; whilst, that of Lovely Loaves continued to plunged to 40000 in the final year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 505, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ncomes to less than 60000 pounds except a recover to approximately 90000 pounds in 2004. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37320574163 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92911297932 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564593301435 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5487197102 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.428571429 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8571428571 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0862276726372 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592289529989 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650697215709 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828238153683 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721769271115 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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