Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do. So, why do you think this is happening?
What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
Nature is beautiful creation by god and it also helpfull to balancing human eco-system. Therefore, it is commonly believe that preservation of natural resources is imperative, yet, most people idle to doing effort for this tent. Some common steps could help the environment. Causing of less effort and solutions are described in ensuing paragraphs.
Nowadays, people have lack of effort to save nature it can be detrimental effect in near future. Today, human population growing fast Therefore, everyone need a big landscape for their various purpose due to this reason many forests are cutting down but citizens don't know about how much harmful for their next generation. For example, according to survey of Times of India, they illustrate the statistical data that from last two decades, woodland are decreased 14% owing to concrete jungle.
Moreover, in current scenario, uses of cars as well as industries are most ruin to the environment. Cars and factories smoke poison gases into the fresh air. It causes air pollution. However, all people are selfish for their joy and earning money. So they are not taking responsibility for the safe environment.
Every situation have such solutions which assist to solve problem. Firstly, engineers should plant planty kampung of trees as they cut it for constructing buildings. Secondly, car users must use public transport rather than private vehicles and thirdly, industries should filter the air after that can release. In addition, government and Non governmental organisation should conduct awareness programs such as poster presentation, street act and so on.
To conclude, nature is a precious gift from god so it is our liability to preserve it properly for us and our next generation. By contributing such as ministry make strict rules for deforestation, uses of cars and smoking of industries as well as people shouldn't disturb nature for their personal issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...smoking of industries as well as people shouldnt disturb nature for their personal issue...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29836065574 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85634933504 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649180327869 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1965770943 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7777777778 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1520398761 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475699636572 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645328622608 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893011284013 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085113246058 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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