Your friend invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. Write a letter and cover the following points:
• Thank him/her and tell about the meal you enjoyed the most.
• How you felt meeting your friend's family.
• What else you liked about this visit.
• Inviting them to your home and and tell him/her about transportation arrangements.
Dear Mohit,
How are you doing? I was going through the old photographs and I came across the pictures of our last Christmas together at your house. It was the most delicious food I had in ages and I couldn’t thank you enough for that.
It is very difficult to find authentic Asian food in Toronto but I must say the meal prepared by your mom has changed my perspective, especially chicken Tikka, which I enjoyed the most. Your mom has always been very kind and generous to me, it was lovely meeting her after ages, and she hasn’t grown old a bit.
I must say, the decoration of house was very impressive; it must have cost a fortune to design such a beautiful house. I really had a great time, especially when I was feeling alone in holyday season. It made me feel at home, which I was missing a lot.
Nevertheless, allow me to host your whole family at lunch on Diwali, which is very auspicious festival in my culture. Don’t worry about the transport, your home is on my way to work, I’ll pick up children and your mother. You can take direct metro from Delhi station, which should get you directly near my house.
Thanks again and I hope to see you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohit, How are you doing? I was going through t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54090909091 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50969607327 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1898807662 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242529274598 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828293222413 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659763373622 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135371893619 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678504403345 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.