Life is a long and unique jurney for everybody. People can enjoy their lives in a different situations .Although some believe that older people can enjoy their life due to having more time others think differently and are against it. I personally think young people can enjoy more than older ones due to their health ,being young and having dream eventhough they have less free time.
To begin with, eventhough being young does not garantee the health but most of the serious disease are more prevalent in older age. We can see different diseases in jeriatric medicine which is only due to their old age. Therefore,health issues is something that reduces the feeling of happiness and joy in the life. In other words, any illnesses can cause people's mood down.
Moreover,young people are more energetic and powerfull which give them confidence . Thinking that being able to do what you want is something that makes people capable and hece happy. But during time this energy decreases and is so sad to feel loosing something that you had before. Therefore, having less energy is something that most of old people complain about and make them unhappy and depressed. For instance, they become more dependent to others for their life and it decreases their sense of self confidence which directly related to the life satisfaction.
Lastly, having dream is something that makes people happy. So, most of the people who lost their dream in life become sad and depressed. In other words, old age people dream less due to not considering any future for themselves.They feel that they do not have enough time to set goals for themselves. Considering less possibility for any achievement make them less joyful.
In conclusion, older people have more time to enjoy their life. However, young people can enjoy their life more than older one. Not only are they more healthy but also have more energy and future goals which gives them more happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94785276074 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50458155503 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457055214724 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5262106663 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8947368421 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450461086596 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166220861788 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154028615482 0.0737576698707 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29507179257 0.150856017488 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143258860954 0.0645574589148 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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