Dear Sir,
I am Sanjeev residing in house number 25 in south ward. Recently I heard in the news regarding the closure of leisure center in our town by local council. I would like to share some important prospects that would happen due to this decision.
Firstly, I and family use facilities such as Gym and table tennis during our free time. I and My friends meet up at bowling alley during weekends to have some fun. Games such as Swimming, Badminton and tennis in our center attract more youth from other place to ride over night in weekends, to enjoy their leisure time over here.
Coming to the importance of sports center, Many People in our locality are private employees. For keeping their health fit they use Gym and yoga classes in our recreational center. Students improve their thinking ability by playing games such as Chess and maze.
The Main problems faced due to the closure are private organisations charge more and common people cannot afford it due to which they lose interest in keeping themselves fit.
Please look into our plea and reconsider on the decision of closing the sports center.
Thanks,
Yours Sincerely,
Sanjeev
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44523391128 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654639175258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.917074782 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203582949935 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804102947347 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615686688667 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101493995111 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608069688021 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.