In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay
Have you ever wondered what causes that people live longer nowadays than before? There can be different explanations about this phenomenon. In this essay, I will discuss how technology, physical exercise and advances in medicine make people live longer.
To begin with, technology has improved the length of people’s lives. Since people have access to internet on their cellphones, they can easily be informed about the kind of food they can consume and avoid. For instance, my sixty-year-old mom likes to watch videos on YouTube and reads blogs in order to know the fruits and vegetables that are good for her health. In addition to this, people get informed on the amount of food they should consume, and they do not even have to visit the nutritionist. As an example, my mother also makes a food pyramid based on the information she found online, and it really paid off.
Another reason is physical exercise. In the past, most people did not know how important regular workout was for her health. For example, in North America there was a problem of obesity in the 20th century, but things have changed, the obesity problem has reduced 15%. Moreover, more gyms and spaces where people can work out are being built nearby. For instance, a new gym was open two years ago right next to our neighborhood, and my brother was able to join it, so he is now in a good shape.
One last reason is the advances in medicine that help people cure and prevent severe diseases. More and more treatments and medications for serious diseases have been released in this century. A friend of mine suffered from breast cancer lately; however, she found an advanced and cheap treatment in a hospital that helped her get rid of it.
In conclusion, in this essay I have described how technology, exercise and advances in medicine help people’s lifetime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in medicine make people live longer. To begin with, technology has improved t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85759493671 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59385590335 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598101265823 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0216702771 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180106790111 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062736245774 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657675943473 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117504946224 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100741900869 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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