To start with about this topic, both art and public services are essential for the society. Art is something comes naturally for a person with gifted talent. It may not be developed via some vigorous training rather it comes from the people the way they view this society. Any kind of talent should be encouraged in their art form. Public service is the most basic thing for the development of the society. Its the primary responsibility of the government to provide essential services to the people of their country. So that lives of the people will prosper and they will help the country grow forward.
Now we will go into the details about this topic. For a government spending money for the public services such as transportation, healthcare and finance are necessary. This helps the people to communicate with each other and lead a healthy life. Moreover the growth of the country will be measured by the public services provided by the government for the welfare of the people. So the funding allocated and spent for these government services should be given top priority.
On the other side we need to provide importance for art, since there are so many varieties of arts such as drawing, painting, entertainment. This will give the people harmony and peace in life. Though the public services are provided by the government, people will get stressed out if they are working continuously without any amusement. Art will cheer them up and reclaim the lost interest due to working hard. All the successful people in this world should have been inspired by many things even art. And that helps them to bring new innovation to the people and country they live. So government should spend money to improve the art skills. The success of the country will be remembered forever by the art and it is going to tell the success story to the future generation.
So i conclude that both art and public services are like pair of eyes given for the human being. Both should be grown and flourished simultaneously to create the most developed country in the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: innovation
... even art. And that helps them to bring new innovation to the people and country they live. So...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, kind of, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81971830986 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57382795833 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487323943662 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9342498387 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7727272727 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243412493961 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081737233879 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653440681614 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158366089993 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038641820217 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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