Drug abuse is becoming more and more common in many countries. What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions?
With the globally growing number of drug users over the last decade, the abuse of such harmful substance is considered a universal challenge for today’s world. Although this phenomenon has caused several thorny problems, they could be addressed by a number of appropriate remedies.
As people have become increasingly more dependent on drugs and its production has expanded worldwide, many related troubles have emerged. The main negative factor is that the crime rates have been higher, ranging from social offences such as burglary and stealing to capital ones, including murder and trafficking. Therefore, societies have turned into less secure and people’s sense of anxiety has grown, a fact that contributes to the higher stress level around the world. Further complications might include a rise in health problems and the mounting conflict between drug addicts and their families.
There are several measures that governments could perform to mitigate the aforementioned issues. The first, crucial solution would be to increase the citizen awareness about the adverse results of drug abuse by providing infomercials and extracurricular activities at schools, universities and other public places. A second measure could be for governments to tighten the sanctions in order to reduce the number of crime committed by drug addicts. Finally, relatives and counsellors of drug victims, as well as the whole society, should encourage and give them considerable support, which can help them recover and regain their lives.
In conclusion, various solutions can be taken to alleviate the issues that have risen as the number of drug addict increase remarkably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59215686275 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88702036399 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.764625149 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.636363636 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158808554458 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553056034641 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505349943631 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879462006924 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133704306722 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.78 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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