The friend plays the vital role in everyone life. most of us believe friendship is the god's gift to nature because we have the independence to choose our own friend. In our routine life, we meet the various kind of the people at every stage of our life. However, only limited people are very close to our heart and they become a good friend. Some people believe that the holding of the old friendship is important and others not. I don't believe that should give more importance to the old friendship compare to making new friends because of the support and experience.
First making the new friend is for good accessibility. As a part of the carrier advancement, we all move to different locations. however, old friends, it's not possible to move with us always. so most of the time it is mandatory to make friends from your surroundings. friends near to you would be more available when you need their help either way like sharing emotions like happy and sad. we all make friends in our life to share emotions like problems as well as happiness. if the friend is next to you, it makes easy to share your feelings. for example, when I was working as a software developer at Tech solutions, I got the promotion and I was moved to head office. Initially, I don't have any friends at the new location and I face real difficulty with my boarding and I stay for almost two weeks in a motel. Later I become close to one of my colleague and he helped me to find the rental house.
Second, making a new friend always a thrilling experience. Every stage of our life we all met the new people and making friends with them really a fresh experience. Especially, if a friend from the different culture or country, we always have a chance to learn their culture and language. For an instant, when I was going to Europe for my higher studies I really face difficulty with their language because I don't know their language and culture. However, when i was started to speak their language and adopted their culture i was really feel amazing because of their a fresh experience.
In conclusion, I believe making new friends always readily available to support and also a new experience in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56997455471 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56003671493 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468193384224 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2475122977 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8636363636 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200818158478 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072602756093 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620662024724 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130912124198 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435708280333 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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