In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is on the increase. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment.
Discuss the extent to which to which you agree or disagree. Support you point of view with reasons or examples.
In today's society the number of crimes done by teenagers is skyrocketing significantly. Many individuals believe that the young people who are involved in major crimes should get adult punishment, no matter what their age is. I tend to believe that the punishment should be based on the kind of crimes and their age should also be valued. This essay will elaborate further by providing the reasons with appropriate examples.
To commence with, teenagers with major crimes should really get adult punishment. To be precise, crimes should be categorized under certain key points and then the culprit should be punished. For instance, if someone has committed a rape or killed someone then he should be punished regardless of his age. In brief, if the degree of crime is really intolerable and big then they should definitely get the adult punishment.
Having said that, all the misconducts can not be treated with the same kind of punishment. More specifically, when a teenager with his immature understanding commits certain misdeed, for example, if a teenager has theft certain amount of money from somewhere then he should not be liable to get huge punishment as the adult people get with their mature understanding and with known intention. Thus, before punishing any teenager with adult punishment, their crimes should be analyzed by keeping in mind their young age as well.
In conclusion, teenagers should be punished definitely for major misconducts but not for all crimes. I strongly believe that while punishing the teenage criminals their wrongdoings should be considered first with their ages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20463320463 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81369447735 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528957528958 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4763126419 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251472468523 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116809382201 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666136042948 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180111317951 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555994342259 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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