Museums are the greatest source to maintain the artifacts in order to keep the importance of history alive in any nation. In many countries, an entrance fee is made mandatory for the museums. I think that this step of charging the audience for entering museums have many benefits as discussed in this essay.
Admittedly, there are numerous reasons why the museums should have an admission fee. First and foremost, for maintenance purpose, to take care of arts, artifacts, and other exhibition items, some amount of money should be made fixed for the people who want to enjoy the exhibits in the art gallery. Another significant argument in favor is that this admission fee can help to limit the number of visitors who are interested to visit the museum. In other words, if there is no entrance fee, then this can result in a massive amount of audience which will make any exhibition an over-crowded place. Therefore, restricting the number of people by charging money can be a best option to maintain the decorum of the museums.
Another reason is that charges earned by the art galleries can help in nurturing the economy of the nation. The amount collected can be used for the betterment of locals of the country. Moreover, these museums are the key factor for attracting the tourism from all parts of the world. Thus, the more the number of tourists, the more benefit is to the countries in terms of large turnover budget. For example, London is known for its prominent and well-established museums and is successful in maintaining the value of history in the hearts of people all around the globe. All the money collected from the visitors in London city to enter the museums helps to increase the economy of the country.
In conclusion, entrance fee taken in any museum or exhibition helps in keeping the history alive and benefits the country in terms of economy and promoting tourism. Thus, the admission fee subjected to the museums has many advantages rather than its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90855457227 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66907701649 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480825958702 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0805183857 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285709427549 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974143428992 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520341200391 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182355778757 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333105537257 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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