More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is true that big cities are very engaging for people who want to search of a better life. However, city life can become a nightmare for some people. In my opinion, I believe whoever can encounter difficulties when they leave for cities and governments should do something to help them.
Living in big cities bring about more opportunities, but it has many difficulties. Firstly, city life is very expensive. House prices in big cities are much higher than that in countryside. Thus, many people become homeless and they have to rent houses all their life. Moreover, it is not only house prices but also cost of living and travelling. Therefore, if people earn twice or third as much as working in countryside, they also must pay similarly. Secondly, completion in cities is very cutthroat. In spite of more job opportunities, it is not easy to get an employment in big cities. Because there are many people with same level, companies will choose carefully among applicants and evaluate them by soft skills, foreign language skills and so on. Thirdly, migrating to cities can cause traffic jam. Last but not least, there is a lack of sense of community in big cities, people do not even know their neighbors. This can make kids being less communication. In addition, adults are quite busy, which can make them be farther away from their children.
To solve these difficulties as mentioned above, government should give some solutions. Government could extend the resident area to mitigate population density, also to have more space for newcomers. Besides, more public buses with better facilities should be introduced to reduce traffic jam. Finally, local authorities should offer financial supports for the poor and homeless people and provide them career prospects to maintain their life.
To sum up, it seems to me that there are various reasons for the problem in cities life that we are facing now and steps need taking to tackle this problem.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, in addition, in my opinion, in spite of, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00305810398 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64891829543 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60244648318 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6298684862 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9047619048 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416668013466 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115063619765 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797638157502 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240588027695 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100062074115 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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