We all have favorite activities that we enjoy. Write an essay convincing readers to try the activity that you enjoy the most.
Every person has his or her own hobbies; however, some leisure activities are more meaningful and enjoyable than others. Languages of love are the way humans attain extasy via other people. They render life experience better. One of the most significant languages of love is quality time, which consists in allocating to one's friend. Hanging out with friends fulfills quality time to people and is my favorite hobbies. People should try it because from hanging out with friends, they cultivate theirselves through learning from others and make meetings more productive.
First of all, hanging out with friends benefits people on both sides of the friendship. When two friends perform an activity together, new connections are created between them. For example, after receiving my final result from high school, one of my neighbors invited me to go out with him. As I went with him, I got to know him more, and he advised me on how I should plan for college. Because we went out together, I got to know more about how to handle the future.
Second, to discover who someone really is, it is important to talk with him or her in an environment when a person is free from any distraction. Important business meeting in my community are not done in places where organizations are located for example. Companies tend to get their employee to restaurant to discuss their business matters in order to increase the productivity of their discussions. In new environments, people acts in their most natural ways, which is an important trait when one wants to know more about someone.
In conclusion, everybody should to hang out with their friends as a way to have leisure time. Spending time with friends creates particular bones between them and allows them have productive discussions with their friends.
- Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. 65
- Good teachers set challenging tasks to their students 60
- Are Dinosaurs endothermic or not? 76
- A good sense of humor is an important for humans. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and details to support your answer. 73
- Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...y time, which consists in allocating to ones friend. Hanging out with friends fulfil...
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Line 2, column 405, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...hould plan for college. Because we went out together, I got to know more about how ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, second, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 301.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99003322259 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68100342863 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4840288712 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3529411765 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998495963713 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316827409678 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351650211032 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554546469794 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022437712145 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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