Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are causes for this? what is possible solution can you suggest?
In recent years, crime ratio, especially in metro cities, has been increased. Some people believe that many criminals are not getting the lesson form their punishment but become more aggressive criminals. There are myriad reasons for this deplorable condition and I will discuss some of them in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, accompany of the wicked people in prison is one of the primary reason to encourage criminals to do more crime. This is because of their brainwash by other criminals during the period of punishment. For instance, I rad news that a drug smuggler operates their business from jail by contacting people in prison who was about to complete their punishment. he was offering hefty money to them for the illegal transition of drugs and cocaine. Besides this, sometimes our society is not accepting people who are criminals and come back after completing their punishment. This step encourages them to do criminals activity again.
Nevertheless, we can control this critical condition by making some changes in our way to give punishments of some liberal crimes. For example, doing free social work compare to send behind the bars as punishment for the light crimes such as car accident or theft is one of the ways to control mind contamination. It will fruitful for both societies and the victim. Moreover, Motivational talk session before releasing them from prison can change their thinking and help them to re-establish themselves in society again.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that life is not easy in and after completing capital punishment but including some free social work is the hope of to make our society more peaceful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11678832117 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73163419043 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8076623457 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.142857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176005612069 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637595073172 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337915440512 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939776248523 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591188393257 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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