Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Thanks to the developments in many aspects of our lives, it is claimed that people have plenty of options to choose from. I agree with this opinion because of the following reasons.
First of all, we are now in an era of technology, so it is not difficult for people to take a huge of information via a click of a mouse on the internet. For instance, if you type "Vietnamese restaurant" as the keyword in the google, all of the Vietnam serving food which is near to your current location will be listed together with the number of stars ranking. Another evidence supports the diversity of choices nowadays is the variety of occupations. The developments of the society, and many negative consequences that we are facing now give the birth for many careers. For example, environmental-related problems, like air pollution, global warming, increasing significantly in carbon dioxide emissions, need environmentalists; stress-related issues such as depression and anxiety are where psychologists' role can be seen.
Moreover, people at present have many choices for entertainment. While children could relax in the free time by reading books or outdoor activities in the past, they are now spending time on the game online, social websites like Facebook or Instagram, and beauty clubs. Finally, the competitions between two companies manufacturing the same product provide the variety of choices for consumers. Take Samsung and Apple as good examples, since both businesses want their income from the phones to outweigh the other, they investigate in their product to adapt to customer tastes.
To sum up, I concur that we have a plethora of choices in today’s world, and it seems that the availability of options will keep on increasing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ant' as the keyword in the google, all of the Vietnam serving food which is near to y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21554770318 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25940655628 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1584879637 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148603901459 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585186644197 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523903896293 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951374198724 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545825748838 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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