In modern Life, cars play an important role in daily activities. There are an enhancing number of own cars in many nations. It is one of the inventions that makes humans life much easier, meanwhile it has it's own drawbacks as well. This essay will elucidate both pros and cons of this trend.
One of the key reason is that people are living in the world where they are praised for their high living standards. So, they use luxurious cars to travel even walkable distances, just to show- off.
In a study conducted in India shows that many Indian have their own cars in a family.Beside public means for example buses take huge amount of time to reach at the destination because it stops at different stoppage for passengers. In order to save time, people travel by their own cars. They donot need to worry about the particulars times of public transports and freely move at any time according to there convenient.
On the other side, traffic congestion and pollution increases by increase in the number of own vehicles. Most of the roads are overcrowded due to plenty of cars running around the clock which release harmful fumes in air and causes various breathing problems such as asthma and eyes irritation. In addition to this, most of the time roads are blocked due to parking of cars haphazardly which causes inconvenience to the commuters. So this problems increases day by day as private cars increases on roads.
To sum up, having a car gives someone freedom and standard of living but traffic congestion and pollution are major problems faced by almost all the countries around the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80144404332 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54902280021 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7593690297 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121170269297 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423719915135 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562923727591 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636526897185 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051064070931 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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