Issue Topic:
A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The author puts forth the idea of introducing a national curriculum which is to be followed by all the schools nation wide. The author must have thought about various aspects before suggesting this measure, however, he didn't account the practical implementation of the programme and its consequences. As a result I disagree with the authors claim to a great extent. The practical barriers which will hinder the implication of such an initiative are:
Take the example of the fingers on our palm. Are all the five of the same size? Of course not. Each of the fingers has a specific ability which the others don't have and each performs a stipulated function. Moving ahead with the same analogy, a particular country is made up of various diverse regions inhibited by unique human beings. Do all the regions function similarly? No, each has a specific way of conduct which the others don't have. What will happen if we introduce a common curriculum in all the regions and forced the schools to follow them? The idea might not prove salubrious. The students of the underdeveloped region might not be able to cope up and ultimately distant themselves from studies.
A country like India is made up of cities, towns and villages. Agriculture constitutes around seventy to eighty percent of the total employment where as the remaining are in the cities and towns. We all are very well furnished between the infrastructure of a village, town and a city. Issuing a national curriculum will result into the students of the cities to study something which is below their level whereas those from the villages will find it difficult since the curriculum will be at an intermediate level. Instead, it will be wiser to set up curriculums according to the level of students. For instance a particular syllabus can be prescribed for the cities, another for the towns or villages like wise.
Vast countries like Russia and India have different time zones and also diverse geographical and atmospheric conditions. For areas along the sea coast, winter and summer will have a minute difference and on the other hand, those away from the sea coast will have extreme summer and winter conditions. The schools of New Delhi go on a vacation during the month of February-March due to the freezing temperatures and those of Mumbai and the surrounding region are on a vacation in the month of May. For a national curriculum, to be set up, the entire nation should have the same academic year, same timing of exams, etc which is not at all possible. As a result it will be an ill-logical solution.
Inspite of the above drawbacks, the idea does have some benifits too. With a standarized pattern, the students will be competing with the entire nation and eventually will be aware about their rankings at the national level. One single exam will suffice the requirement of testing a students aptitude or knowledge to get an admission in various institutions.
Albeit, the above advantages seem meagre and will turn out to be true only when the curriculum is implemented. But there are few factors which are preventing its implementation and those can't even be over come by man. Hence instead of a national curriculum, I would suggest to implement a standard curriculum in those regions having similar geographical and climatic conditions and thus expand the number of schools studying under the same curriculum.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 80
- Issue Topic: The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agre 100
- People work because they need money to live What are some other reasons that people work Discuss one or more of these reasons Use specific examples and details to support your answer 86
- Government should focus on solving the problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 75
- ISSUE TOPIC An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor s record of treating similarly afflicted patients Through gaining such access the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical conditio 70
Comments
Kindly throw some light on
Kindly throw some light on this:
flaws:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.237 0.35
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Sentence: One single exam will suffice the requirement of testing a students aptitude or knowledge to get an admission in various institutions.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and aptitude
Sentence: Inspite of the above drawbacks, the idea does have some benifits too.
Error: benifits Suggestion: benefits
Sentence: With a standarized pattern, the students will be competing with the entire nation and eventually will be aware about their rankings at the national level.
Error: standarized Suggestion: standardized
Sentence: Albeit, the above advantages seem meagre and will turn out to be true only when the curriculum is implemented.
Error: meagre Suggestion: meager
flaws:
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.237 0.35
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 574 350
No. of Characters: 2760 1500
No. of Different Words: 282 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.895 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.808 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.766 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 195 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 147 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 101 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.516 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.791 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.452 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.237 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.455 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.05 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5