Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
Art has been an integral part of our lives throughout the history and it is clear that, we need all the artists, especially the creative ones to provide us with extraordinary masterpieces which feed our souls. Nowadays, it is quite debatable that whether existence of some restrictions by governments on artists is beneficial or vice versa. According to the general thought, musicians, artists, film makers- all should be independent at their works. Personally I also support this thought, and actually, in my mind, it is better to give them full freedom at expressing themselves. I will try to expla...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 284 350
No. of Characters: 1370 1500
No. of Different Words: 172 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.105 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.779 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 88 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.627 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5