The reading article states that full length portrait of a teenage girl owned by a member of the Austen family has come up for sale and provides three reasons to believe that she is the subject of professional painting.However the professor explains that evidence linking which were not convincing and refutes each of the authors reasons.
First ,the reading claims that in 1882 several decades after Austen's death, Austen 's family gave permission to use the portrait as an illustration in an edition of her letters.The professor refutes this point by saying that Jane died almost 70 years ago and family members not seen themselves.
Second, the article posits that the face in the portrait clearly resembles the one in Cassandra's sketch. However the professor says that Austen's has many relatives and their extended family members were large . Jane Austen has many cousin and it could be one of her cousin's or niece who is a teenager.
The reading says that the painting is unsigned and undated there is evidence that it was painted when Austen was a teenager. The professor opposes this point by saying that date on a stamp of blank canvas indicates that was sold by William. William didn't sell this in London until Jane Austen was 27 years old. Looks like canvas were used when Jane Austen is older than a girl which is portrait in the painting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 232.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84913793103 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47250533207 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564655172414 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.4148055113 49.2860985944 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 21.698381199 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549392037429 0.272083759551 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223360678965 0.0996497079465 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915518350898 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326449696163 0.162205337803 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245395413658 0.0443174109184 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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