It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize
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- It is the time for a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the serious investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest communities in Blockchain field to co-ordinate organize 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...r a global Blockchain event as worldwide will be happened in Viet Nam with the se...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...investment of 7 technology pioneer units and attaching over 20 Viet Nam strongest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 19.5258426966 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 33.0505617978 3% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 58.6224719101 10% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 202.0 2235.4752809 9% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 40.0 442.535393258 9% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.51486685937 4.55969084622 55% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 3.12209865315 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 35.0 215.323595506 16% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.875 0.4932671777 177% => OK
syllable_count: 60.3 704.065955056 9% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 202.0 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 23.4991977007 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.21951772744 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 1.0 0.243740707755 410% => The coherence between essay topic and essay body is overfitting.
Sentence topic coherence: 1.0 0.0831039109588 1203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 1.0 0.150359130593 665% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 14.1392134831 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.38706741573 138% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 100.480337079 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 11.8971910112 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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