In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Submitted by Zeid690 on Tue, 09/11/2018 - 20:28

Many people like shopping in a large chain stores, also, they are considering shopping at small stores inconvenient and uncomfortable. For that, chain stores have controlled the whole market. However, this situation has advantages and disadvantages.

On one hand, shoppers believe that a large chain stores are a good place for shopping for different reasons;
first of all, malls or a large market offer an array of products or services. They have many sections where contain various shape of items. They are a part of large company, for this reason, it is not difficult for them to have this variety of products. In other words, chain stores have opportunity to sell their services or products at a lower prices. They are essential agent to a large company which is responsible for manufacturing the products. They also have ability to make a discount for buyers who sells a huge quantity. Secondly, chain stores save the time of shoppers because of all services or products at one roof and place, at the same time, shoppers can easily know their destination and target.

On the other hand, there are drawbacks. Additionally, small business and small markets give their customers a unique products or services. Small stores are giving customers personalized products or services and specialized products or services too. Small business can also offer a big knowledgeable recommendations for buyers, simultaneously, sellers can answer all the shoppers questions.

To sum up, it is clear that chain stores are a good place for shopping, but they also have some effects on making things less personal.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 118, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
...l markets give their customers a unique products or services. Small stores are giving cu...
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Line 6, column 300, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'recommendation'?
Suggestion: recommendation
...ness can also offer a big knowledgeable recommendations for buyers, simultaneously, sellers can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87499325847 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6065201061 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265051822538 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971475614994 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536598355528 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164662332617 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519577812286 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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