It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people that trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same? Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages.
Change in one’s life is thought by some to be a better option rather than avoiding it and staying in the monotony. In my opinion, I think that change can bring about more advantages for people compared to any problems it might bring.
Despite the drawbacks below, I believe the benefits gained by people proposing the change are extremely useful for their happy lives. Firstly, it helps people reduce their stress and depression indeed. This helps in increasing work productivity. Take many laborers, for instance, who are given a break for one hour in their working schedule work with more energy as they get relaxed and reenergized. Secondly, changes in relation to lifestyle can have positive points provided one is conscious for their health. This ultimately helps people stay fit and healthy which is a key to living happy life.
Admittedly, there are some issues involved when changes are made up to the extreme levels. One problem is that people may become over conscious which can lead to more stress even. For example, after observing the positive results of exercising, a person may go for hard exercises which may make them anorexic: one of the dreadful condition in which patient has zero fat in their body. Another negative aspect of over consciousness is that may start replacing all their personal belongings, for instance household items, after some time. This can lead to wastage of money and also the resources which are limited. However, these situations are rare, only happening with the mentally unstable population.
In conclusion, staying happy far outweighs any of the minor disadvantages that could result from the changes that one may prefer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...s is that may start replacing all their personal belongings, for instance household items, after so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10545454545 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59327547437 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.041516364 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148912025605 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538162999686 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525787396323 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110302940608 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598030696215 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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