Some people feel that education should be provided exclusively by the state, and that private education should be prohibited.
To what extend do agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some society think that private school should be eliminated and the government should support education exclusively. This mater should be over viewed extensively by the government, since education is the most important aspect for a country. I personally disagree with this view. The country should have both private and government school.
To begin with, the school which provided by the government still has so many limitations. For instance, the facility such as classrooms, the most important place of the learner. The classroom does not have projectors for supporting teaching activity. Student just has their textbook and chair board in their study. Moreover, educator who teach the governmental school is not as well trained as in the private school. They still have less experience in teaching. However, government school give free financial for he students that could not pay their school. So they still could be educated despite the hardship that they might face.
In contrast, facilities in the private school are more comprehensive. Student could learn from the presentation which provided by the teacher. In addition to this the teacher from private school are usually come from abroad. Hence, the student could learn a lot form the international teacher. Although the private school provide the facilities and teachers exclusively student should pay in high price relatively. So most of the private school is for the middle-up class, student should pay in higher price relatively.
Both private education and governmental school have their own characteristic. Learners could chose whether to study in private school or governmental school. They could discus with their family before the signing in the contract with the chosen school. Therefore, possessing a country should have both type of schools to promote nation's knowledge and lead the sociaty leavers
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| 2018-09-12 | Romaito Azhar | 75 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
Some society think that private school should be eliminate...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce, the facility such as classrooms, the most important place of the learner. The...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for the students'?
Suggestion: for the students
..., government school give free financial for he students that could not pay their school. So the...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the facilities and teachers exclusively student should pay in high price relativ...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...heir own characteristic. Learners could chose whether to study in private school or g...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to school'
Suggestion: to school
...signing in the contract with the chosen school. Therefore, possessing a country should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46048109966 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76257029186 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.4869402783 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2272727273 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2272727273 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188966303184 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066412681063 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615917394273 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137290261788 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720289432792 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.5 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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