Some people say that schools do not make enough efforts in teaching young people to look after their health and they add that schools should undertake health education seriously . Do you agree or disagree ?
Undoubtedly , it is universal truth that " health is wealth " , but with today's rapidly changing world health issues are becoming worrying concern . It has been extremely debatable whether schools should take health education seriously or not . I ponder that it will derive positive consequences if added .
Multifarious factors are there to prove it . First and foremost , is that when they are taught at tender age they learn better as it is said that " The early bird catches the worm " and as a result they will become more health conscious which will automatically inhibit the risk of abse...
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Schools are not concerned…
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it is universal truth
it is a universal truth
health issues are becoming worrying concern
health issues are becoming a worrying concern
First and foremost , is that when they are taught at tender age
First and foremost , when they are taught at tender age
Sentence: To recapitulate, I strongly believe that the positive outcomes of adding health education overweigh it's negative side.
Error: overweigh Suggestion: overweight
Sentence: Factor supporting to this is that it is proved by scientific research that child' s mind develop upto the age of 5 and they show extraordinary talent of becoming an erudite .
Error: upto Suggestion: up to
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Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
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