The passage is mainly about frogs and how are they extincting from the nature.Here writer has mentioned some activities by which frogs habitat are being harmed and how can they be saved but as per the speaker there are many in accurate and in reliable reasons when compared to what happened in real.
First,writer has explained that in recent years frogs and its habitat are being affected mainly by the farmers who use insecticides and pesticides in the field for increasing crops.Because of pesticides it has hampered in respiratory system as well.And writer states that if pesticides are not used than only frogs habitat can survive.But speakers contradicted the point as farmers may be loos if their crops are not developed so extinction of frog is not the cause of pesticides.
Second,fungus is also the cause of declination of population and infected frogs dies due to dehydration.And writer has said treatment of antifungal medicine and help frogs to survive but speakers sees it is impossible to give treatment for each individual frogs and it will be expensive and complicated.This is also the contradict about the passage.
Third,writer has explained that due to excessive use of water by human in wetland where frogs lays their eggs is also the cause of declination of population but speakers argues that is not the real cause,declination is due to global warming is the main cause of extinction of frogs and others species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Here
...how are they extincting from the nature.Here writer has mentioned some activities by...
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Suggestion: , writer
...pared to what happened in real. First,writer has explained that in recent years fro...
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Suggestion:
...o what happened in real. First,writer has explained that in recent years frogs...
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...n recent years frogs and its habitat are being affected mainly by the farmers who...
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...cides in the field for increasing crops.Because of pesticides it has hampered in respir...
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... hampered in respiratory system as well.And writer states that if pesticides are no...
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Suggestion: But
...sed than only frogs habitat can survive.But speakers contradicted the point as farm...
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Suggestion: , fungus
...s not the cause of pesticides. Second,fungus is also the cause of declination of pop...
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... infected frogs dies due to dehydration.And writer has said treatment of antifungal...
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...nd it will be expensive and complicated.This is also the contradict about the passag...
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... expensive and complicated.This is also the contradict about the passage. Third,writer has ...
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...e contradict about the passage. Third,writer has explained that due to excessive use...
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Suggestion: , declination
...eakers argues that is not the real cause,declination is due to global warming is the main ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.4613686534 191% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 7.30242825607 219% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 238.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07531166555 2.5805825403 119% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521008403361 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 21.2450331126 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4760867662 49.2860985944 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 301.75 110.228320801 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.5 21.698381199 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06452816374 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448456443724 0.272083759551 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273861408825 0.0996497079465 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045899247111 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273861408825 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045899247111 0.0443174109184 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.3589403974 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 53.8541721854 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 5.55761589404 286% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.0289183223 238% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.42419426049 124% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.7273730684 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.498013245 244% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.2008830022 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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