Some people say that cooking food at home is a waste of time. They claim that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, most people are confused between modernism and tradition. Undoubtedly, one of aspect of modernism is eating at restaurants instead of home making food. Some people insist that going to restaurant is the best choice in industrial world that we are living.
In my opinion, going to restaurant is not good choice most of the time. I have some reason for this idea. Firstly, it is true that restaurant server's food faster and you feel more comfortable, but there is one thing how do you sure what materials they have used? Every day we hear some good restaurants is closed because they do no...
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Sentence: To sum up, I believe cooking at home make an opportunity that everybody at home sitting around a table and see each other.
Suggestion: I believe cooking at home makes an opportunity...
going to restaurant is not good choice most of the time.
going to restaurant is not a good choice in most of the time.
industrial juice dose not very healthy.
industrial juice is not very healthy.
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Sentence Length SD: 5.234 7.5
More compound or complex sentences wanted.
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