You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to get a job.You think he/she get a job.
write a letter to this friend.In your letter,
say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.
explain why getting a job is good idea for him/her.
suggest types of jobs suitable for him/her.
Dear Arun,
I hope this letter finds you in pink of health. I am glad that you wrote to me seeking career guidance about joining college or getting a job. I sincerely believe that you should get a job.
To begin with, having known to you for many years, I think you'll not like theoretical and conventional knowledge imparted in college. Moreover, If you want to join college for sake of degree then you have an alternate of distance education.
Secondly, being in job will save your money and make you independent. You will acquire many skills - time management, prioritizing tasks, discipline and interpersonal skills.
Finally, I've few job suggestions for you. As you are good at coding and analytics, I would suggest you to start freelancing of projects online or you can apply for job in startups.
Apart from this, you can pursue your career as an artist as you are good at paintings.
I hope my advice has been of use to you. I look forward to hearing from you.
Love,
Mandeep
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-09-17 | Mandeep Walia | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Suggestion: you'll
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76436781609 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6519088235 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6083838066 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314496155165 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120514131049 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640303644249 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16508953283 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790892958975 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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