The given table below information on internet use in sex categories by ages group describe the information in the table and make comparison where appropriate.
From tabular chart gives the details of ages Groups of six categories upon internet It is clear,snd coherent representation.
Overall,it us evidence that minimum amount in get news session,and maximum data in searching for people category.
Adding from details, that Ages groups,and get news, online games, download, product reach , buying a product, searching for people . These are six categories.nextly, In first three categories have data amount 76,81,73,54,29,37,75,71,25,70,32 Respectively.
On flip side, another three categorize would data differ from first .as well as In four category is data 0, 79,80,83,79,73,70. Subsequently, In fifth session have amount 43,68,69,67,65,41. finally , In sixth category have been ratio 5,31,23,24,23,29,27 Respectively.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-09-19 | Raman Preet kaur | 56 | view |
| 2018-09-18 | Raman Preet kaur | 58 | view |
| 2018-09-18 | Raman Preet kaur | 46 | view |
- The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to inclined staff productivities. 11
- Some companies uniforms for their staff which must be worm at all times . What are advantages for a company of having a uniform Are here any benefit of having a uniform for a staff. 61
- Some people believe that preserving natural environment is curical. However most make no effort to do so.what do you think this is happening .what are some action that could help the environment 56
- The bar chart below the results of survey conducted by personal department at a major company.the survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers :those age -from 18- 30 an those aged 45-60 and factors affecting their work performance. 78
- Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state 61
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 109 200 //Minimum 150 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 10
No. of Words: 109 200
No. of Characters: 631 1000
No. of Different Words: 77 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.231 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.789 4.6
Word Length SD: 4.271 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 21 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 2.794 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.492 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.703 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.138 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , snd
...six categories upon internet It is clear,snd coherent representation. Overall,it ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...,snd coherent representation. Overall,it us evidence that minimum amount in get ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... that minimum amount in get news session,and maximum data in searching for people ca...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
... Adding from details, that Ages groups,and get news, online games, download, produ...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s, online games, download, product reach , buying a product, searching for people ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., buying a product, searching for people . These are six categories.nextly, In fir...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s.nextly, In first three categories have data amount 76,81,73,54,29,37,75,71,25,7...
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Line 6, column 68, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... categorize would data differ from first .as well as In four category is data 0, 7...
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Line 6, column 89, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
...a differ from first .as well as In four category is data 0, 79,80,83,79,73,70. Subsequen...
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Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
...70. Subsequently, In fifth session have amount 43,68,69,67,65,41. finally , In sixth ...
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Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... session have amount 43,68,69,67,65,41. finally , In sixth category have been ratio 5,...
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Line 6, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n have amount 43,68,69,67,65,41. finally , In sixth category have been ratio 5,31...
^^
Line 6, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have amount 43,68,69,67,65,41. finally , In sixth category have been ratio 5,31,2...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 105.0 196.424390244 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.32380952381 4.92477711251 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.20108587294 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.5191635848 2.65546596893 170% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.752380952381 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3964484099 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.06861187844 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328559547535 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406808229967 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486710084096 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481249860926 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.78 11.4140731707 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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