Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In some cities vehicle-free days’ activity has started to signify and encourage the people not to use the private cars, truck and motorcycles in the city center which make them realize the significant difference due to the less usage of private cars, trucks and motorcycles. People are encouraged as an alternative of using public transportation to travel from one place to another.
As nowadays continuous research is going on that how to provide the pollution free environment to the human beings. According to the researchers, they have observed that vehicle pollution is one of the reason to give preference to the public transport during their root cause analysis. As far as benefits of public transportation are concerned, we may notice that huge number of vehicles cause of excessive harmful gases in the air which are exhausted with smoke. These toxic gases contain harmful CO and NO which make our respiratory system weaker gradually may cause of dangerous diseases in future. Furthermore, another advantage of using public is to reduce congestion on the road. People have to face lot of problem due to the heavy traffic on the road which take long time to stuck-up in the traffic. One of the major benefit is also to reduce the no of accidents as well. Due to the huge no of traffic on the roads also cause increase the risk factor for accidents.
As an alternative of private vehicle, people are encouraged to use the public transportation which will make it easy for people to move around to fulfill their daily routine tasks. As public transport makes it convenient for people to travel easily but on the other hand people have also to face the difficulties due to the public transport like to wait in the queue for the buses and metros. Buses are overcrowded during the peak hours and sometime do not find the seat to sit even for long distance traveling. Besides extensive traveling, some people are old age which is hard for them to stand in the bus due to the limited no of seats for disable persons.
To sum up, comparing the both merits and demerits of vehicle-free days, we may observe that using public transport has less disadvantages comparatively. Activities like vehicle-free days motivate the people to think for the alternative to reduce the unnecessary traffic on the road to make the environment free of harmful gases and also emphasize the Government to realize to arrange the affordable best alternatives for public to travel easily and to provide the maximum facilities for them to make their life easy like by increasing the no of buses and to increase the no of routes for buses ,metros and finally by initiating the cost effective taxis for passengers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 41.998997996 190% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2241.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 457.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90371991247 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79734289014 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463894967177 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.090903454 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0625 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5625 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292184369294 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957885242591 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943704074238 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210683990853 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12648942582 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.