The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.
"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Due to prohibit the skateboarding in Central Plaza the business will return to its previous high level is the prediction of Central Plaza sorters owner mentioned in the letter written to the editor. There is also given that the increases in amount of litter and vandalism throughout the stores; the skateboarders are responsible for it. In the given lines of letter it is not clearly proved that the skateboarders are responsible for decrease in business of Central Plaza stores. There are other factors may be responsible for fall in business.
Firstly, the business is depends on many factors such as economic conditions, needs of population, current fashion, arrangements in stores...etc. Economic condition of the country is the major factor in business because countries economy influence per capital income as well as the inflation in market; For example when condition of inflation arise in the market the people decreases their demands due to high cost of goods. Similarly, the store owner did not mention the economic condition of the market and request to prohibit the skateboarding in the Plaza.
Secondly, the population spreader near the store is also one of the major factor should be consider before conclusion. It may be possible that the lower income group lived near the store and they have little purchase capacity or the university students stay near the store and students do not have as much money to spend on extra needs other than basic need. The design of stores also affects the profit in the business. If the store is attractive and gives discounts and offers than more customers will be attract towards the stores.
Finally, the administration of the stores also important part for increases in business. The cleanliness and vigilance are two important factors should be considered for business enhancement. If the litter and vandalism in stores found than it is not possible that the skateboarding is the main cause. The stores staff should be aware about the stores cleanliness and administration. They have to be so vigilant that take fine from person who speared litter in stores. However, the number of skateboarding increases due to its fashion among students and the ride rashly in stores also but they are not only reason of the increases in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza and decreases in the business of Central Plaza stores.
Conclusively, with prohibition of skateboarding in Central Plaza stores the business will not return to previously high level. The store owner should revise their stores administration policies.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 421 350
No. of Characters: 2129 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.53 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.057 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.76 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.389 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.822 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.578 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... country is the major factor in business because countries economy influence per ...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
... also one of the major factor should be consider before conclusion. It may be possible t...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stores'' or 'store's'?
Suggestion: stores'; store's
... stores staff should be aware about the stores cleanliness and administration. They ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 55.5748502994 103% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 2260.96107784 96% => OK
No of words: 420.0 441.139720559 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1880952381 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8552960301 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 204.123752495 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.468620217663 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 705.55239521 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1959756078 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.684210526 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1052631579 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 5.70786347227 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249991788795 0.218282227539 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871867437653 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911320308587 0.0701772020484 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15706833278 0.128457276422 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861240956638 0.0628817314937 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.