tpo 16 integrated one
The article states that, nowadays there are lots of uncovered archaeological facts, because of the serious problems and limitations which are exist in Britain, and provides three reasons for that. However the professor explains that in 1919 new rule applied in the Britain. This new guideline has improved the situation of archeaology in The United Kingdom. In the lecture she refuses each reasons of the author.
First the reading states that lots of valuable artifacts are lost in construction projects. The lecturer refutes this point by saying that, there is a force to constructors to examine sites by archeaologists before starting a construction. And consider that the site is interested for valuable archeaologic matters or not. If there was something a group of builders, governments, and archeaologists should devise a plan for preserving that artifacts. Also they have to document all issues around the site before starting to work.
Second, the article claims that there is no financial support for archeaological works and they cannot work on lots of sites. However the professor avers that, it is a rule that construction companies have to pay the expenses of archeaological activities in there sites before starting to construction and there is no need for government's help. In this way, the new source of financial supports will be available for the whole of researches. So that, more number of sites will be examined than the past.
Finally the passage avers that, there is a severe in having a job as a archeaologist because of lack of job. The lecturer opposes this Idea by stating that, the rule of searching sites before construction provided a lot of job opportunity for archeaologists and more need to them. She states that, they can work in all stages such as examination of sites, preservation plane, doing researches, processing data, and finally in writing reports and articles.
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However the professor explains that in 1919 new rule applied in the Britain.
However the professor explains that in 1919 new rule was applied in the Britain.
Sentence: In the lecture she refuses each reasons of the author.
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Suggestion: Refer to each and reasons
Sentence: However the professor avers that, it is a rule that construction companies have to pay the expenses of archeaological activities in there sites before starting to construction and there is no need for government's help.
Description: The fragment in there sites is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace there with adjective
Sentence: The article states that, nowadays there are lots of uncovered archaeological facts, because of the serious problems and limitations which are exist in Britain, and provides three reasons for that.
Error: archaeological Suggestion: archeological
Sentence: This new guideline has improved the situation of archeaology in The United Kingdom.
Error: archeaology Suggestion: archeology
Sentence: The lecturer refutes this point by saying that, there is a force to constructors to examine sites by archeaologists before starting a construction.
Error: archeaologists Suggestion: archeologists
Sentence: And consider that the site is interested for valuable archeaologic matters or not.
Error: archeaologic Suggestion: archeology
Sentence: If there was something a group of builders, governments, and archeaologists should devise a plan for preserving that artifacts.
Error: archeaologists Suggestion: archeologists
Sentence: Second, the article claims that there is no financial support for archeaological works and they cannot work on lots of sites.
Error: archeaological Suggestion: archeological
Sentence: However the professor avers that, it is a rule that construction companies have to pay the expenses of archeaological activities in there sites before starting to construction and there is no need for government's help.
Error: archeaological Suggestion: archeological
Sentence: Finally the passage avers that, there is a severe in having a job as a archeaologist because of lack of job.
Error: archeaologist Suggestion: archeologist
Sentence: The lecturer opposes this Idea by stating that, the rule of searching sites before construction provided a lot of job opportunity for archeaologists and more need to them.
Error: archeaologists Suggestion: archeologists
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