In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner.
Discuss both systems.
It is generally taken for granted that marriage, as we all have probably heard and experienced, not only can be considered as an inseparable section of every individual’s survival, but also provide an opt ground to create new families. There are some countries with a belief that parents should decide who their children marry with however the rest believe that people should be free to choose their future’s spouse. Psychologists are of the point of view that every person should marry in an age, which he/she is able to make an appropriate choice for his/her own and at that age there is no reason to parents arrange their children’s marriage.
At first place, I would like to point out on of the positive aspects of arranging marriage by their parents such as having experience, which makes a vitally fundamental contribution to comprehending who is the right person. As an illustration parents undoubtedly and indisputably have seen numerous people with a wealth of attitudes thus they can recognize divers types of humans.
There is however a reverse side to this coin, The ones who agree with the idea of every one should choose his/her own partner, commonly tend to be more realistic. In Their viewpoint one who wants to get married is the only one who is aware of his demands and desires from his/her partner is him/her self on account of the fact that at the end he/she is going to live with his/her partner.
To sum up, all these long stories come down to the fact that is spite of every parent’s experiments, every existence should choose his/her partner. To me it is to some extent true and every one should have an opportunity to choose as well as consulting with his/her elders no matter his/her parents or anyone else although the parents are the only ones who understand their children.
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