This argument made by the business manager of the television station is valid and the memorandum to increase the weather and local news is a right one. The evidences which makes the argument a correct decision are the following.
The first evidence is in the memorandum's starting few lines, as the late-night program has devoted more time to national news, the complaints from viewers about showing more weather and local news have increased. The news station might be showing the weather and local news at some different time, but at that time the people of the area might be at work or busy to look at the news and late-night news programs are accesible and free time for the local residents.
As the local area wants to be updated about their own city/town, the devotion to only national news is one of the case which is the reason of increased complaints. Also, the weather news is important to the people, as the late-night program is the perfect time for weather so that people are ready to tackle the next day knowing what kind of weather it is going to be. So the lessening of weather news time affects the local population.
Another evidence is the canceling of advertising contracts by local businesses. As it might be the case that the local businesses used to sponser the news station because of the local news which also covered their interests, the local businesses used to know what type of customers they can expect and if the neighbourhood is safe or not. The advertise issued made no sense or connection with the news as it used to make earlier, the lessening of local news time has not at all been a merit for local businesses and hence the cancellation of the advertisement contracts.
Also can be assumed that because of increase in the national news time, the cost for running the news station might have increased which also makes the case of cancellation of the advertisements by the local businesses.
The business manager of the station takes a firm but important stand on increasing the weather and local news time to its former level so that the viewers are more and they avoid losing more advertisement contracts.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1743 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.648 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.568 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.801 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.46 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.741 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.153 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... weather and local news have increased. The news station might be showing the weath...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd if the neighbourhood is safe or not. The advertise issued made no sense or connection with...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...tion of the advertisement contracts. Also can be assumed that because of increase...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 374.0 441.139720559 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77005347594 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6325590015 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409090909091 0.468620217663 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 705.55239521 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3900511288 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 23.324526521 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.70786347227 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480397483602 0.218282227539 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212328449496 0.0743258471296 286% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10988997785 0.0701772020484 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28399240152 0.128457276422 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810320863466 0.0628817314937 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.3799401198 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 98.500998004 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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