From the past year you have been a member of Local club now you want to discontinue your membership. Write a letter to the club secretary.
In your letter
State what type of membership you have and how you paid your fee.
Give details how you benefitted from the club
Explain why you want to leave.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in order to request you to terminate my membership in your club.
My name is Alisa markel and my membership ID is A21344. I have a platinum membership and I have paid $500 per year through my debit card.
Your club had aided me in several ways. I had availed a lot of services such as meditation, therapy classes, yoga sessions, and many more leisure activities.The club had also helped me in being physically fit.
The reason behind the discontinuation of membership is that I am relocating to another city and I would be difficult for me to come in your club from that place.I request you to withdraw my name from the members list. Please let me know about the formalities.
I look forward for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Alisa markel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 665.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80868732503 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0049778965 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.8888888889 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312781797942 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119545099678 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976794689352 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165251685782 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098701658668 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.