Cellphone and phone are one of the great achievement of science and technology.In my opinion cellphones and mobiles phone should be strictly prohibited to children.
In this early age i do not think to give cellphones and mobile phones is a good idea because if we gave them a cellphones and mobiles they are not interested on outdoor games,they spend most of the time on online games,they are not able to be familiar with their family friend and neighbors.
In my opinion In this age children mind is blind they can learn very fast.They can capture things easily.If we provide cellphones and mobiles to children they are not interested on out door games.They are always hanging on mobile phones with different games.They always spend their precious time at home with their phones.They do not want to go out side which effect on their health also because they are not able to stay on good environment. Ignoring on outdoor games they are not physically strong and healthy for example One of my neighbor provide mobiles phone to their son that child was always busy on her phone.He never come out side to play so that he is suffer from many health problem now he has to wear glass every time on his eye.
Children are not using those cellphones and mobile phones for study. They only use to play the games. because of this they are are not focus on their study.They are not sleeping in the time.They spend their time on different websites.They do not care about their health.
Children who are always busy on their phone they cant familiar with their friend,family,and relatives.They always seems alone.They do not have a friend to whom they can play ,share the things.Children who makes phones as their friend they can go on depression.Children who can not familiar with others they cannot face the problems on outside.
At last i request all the parents do not give cellphones phone to children.It is not very useful to them and not very good for their children health.think twice before giving them .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79768786127 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75313741614 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465317919075 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.386907384 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.444444444 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4444444444 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126352412146 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845397615739 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551890561021 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906512951069 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325587067405 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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