Any form of art is the respective artist's imagination and is not restricted to any boundaries and frameworks. Consequently, the factors responsible to decide a particular art form to fall in merit is wide-ranging and obscure. Considering the understanding of people regarding an artwork as the only basis of merit is quite narrow and unsubstantial.
To commence upon with, it is not necessary that popularity and comprehension by the public are the only yardsticks to rate an art form. Artists from Van Gogh to Picasso, literary progenies like Jane Austen and Franz Kafka, musical maestros like Bach and Ray Charles are acknowledged quite late of their time. However, this does not mean that their work was any less. Art is timeless and eternal and will inspire and connect to people if not today then tomorrow.
Furthermore, art is an abstract form and is not bounded by the barriers of language, culture, expertise, and physical handicaps. Music of wizards like Bach and Mozart are used as therapies for the alternate treatment of mentally handicapped people. It is quite plausible that the people taking therapies might not be aware of the technicalities, lyrics of the music but the tempo, rhythm, etc are just perfect to bring the ameliorative effect. Similarly, Sufi songs are heard worldwide though might not know the meaning of its lyrics, it brings the desired placid effect. Therefore, art is as boundary-less as it is eternal.
However, where art can transcend boundaries and let people rejuvenate, in a similar fashion it can reach out to people and can be the cause of social change. But for that, the art form should be comprehensible and consonant with the majority of people. For instance, many protests involve a poster or an anthem to fight against. In India, Vande Mataram song was written by Rabindranath Tagore in order for the arousal of patriotism in the people of the country to fight against the colonialists. Hence, good art can educate and create empathy and empathy can be used to bring change.
In summary, complete understanding and acknowledgment by a large number of people cannot themselves decide the merit of an art form. For art is eternal, boundless and abstract in nature, can be recognized in merit based upon a single factor. Art is powerful and brings the freedom of expression with itself. With proper execution, art can bring changes to the life of most vulnerable groups of the society.
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 54
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middleburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mid 50
- In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your re 58
- Critical judgement of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field. 50
- Claim: Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted, since it may well be proven false in the future.Reason: Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate. 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'artists'' or 'artist's'?
Suggestion: artists'; artist's
Any form of art is the respective artists imagination and is not restricted to an...
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Line 8, column 72, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a similar fashion" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d boundaries and let people rejuvenate, in a similar fashion it can reach out to people and can be t...
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Line 10, column 58, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ete understanding and acknowledgment by a large number of people cannot themselves decide the mer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02216748768 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91792510658 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519704433498 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7689975886 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0952380952 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183014019212 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588937998503 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379698007548 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105369746063 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375766661313 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.