Governments should hire accomplished filmmakers to create films that deliver important public messages.
In recent age, movies are more focused on more technology, romance and thriller. Ongoing trend is reflected as a public interest of watching movies of mentioned genre. Filmmakers considers a movie production as a profitable business and eventually leads to create movies in which public is interested to welcome movie on big screen. In era of such competition, motto of movie makers is anything but providing social message to society. Situation can be mitigated with the help of government funding to those filmmakers who are willing to take such initiatives and not looking film production as a profitable trade.
Government shall also instigate movie making competitions and shall started funding scholarship or finance to winners. Neophyte talents are hungry for opportunities not for money. And by such government initiative, many such novice film makers get platform to showcase their talent. It is win-win situation for government and film makers those are willing to spread social messages. Accolades shall also be given at the end of the year to the best movies who convince relatively the best public message to society. Oscar nomination and award distribution is the best suitable example which shall be simulated at regional level or country level too.
Generally, public message oriented movies are not found interesting by many people and apparently they lost interest in such movies. Because of similar reason, people start loosing interest in public message movies and short films, which may lead to detrimental effects to government initiatives. So, funding is not only factor to look upon. Maintaining interest of people shall not be undermined by fixating more on social messages. To overcome issue of lacking of public interest, historical movies can be recreated by concentracing on center message of the historical event. Many advertisement producers also used to create funny and comedy short films and/or advertisements which give best social message in the most interesting way.
Social movies can be best spreaded in the industry by inspiring and funding the film makers. This also includes providing best infrastructure and access to any sites all over the nation to explore current situation of the country and create message accordingly. Apart from this, public awareness shall be increased by free or discounted film promotion and creating movies in the most interested manner that public are looking for. Ongoing Oscar winning short-films and films can be proved best resource to learn from. Neophyte filmmakers shall take inspiration from it.
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| 2022-07-14 | Vaishnavi Dixit | 50 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 685, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'give the best'.
Suggestion: give the best
...short films and/or advertisements which give best social message in the most interesting ...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'providing the best'.
Suggestion: providing the best
...ing the film makers. This also includes providing best infrastructure and access to any sites ...
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Line 7, column 483, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'proved the best'.
Suggestion: proved the best
...ar winning short-films and films can be proved best resource to learn from. Neophyte filmma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, look, may, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 33.0505617978 27% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39603960396 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83706992999 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497524752475 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6804383807 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171902220128 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560517402673 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434778711158 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118646546902 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196854368281 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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