The line graph shows the report of the consumption of three types of fast food by Australia youths from 1975 to 2000
The line graph shows the report of the consumption of three types of fast food by Australia youths from 1975 to 2000. According to the graph, the consumption of Pizza and Hamburger went up.
Firstly, the frequency of Australia children to consume fast food from 1975 to 1985 fluctuated to 95 times and slumped dramatically to 38 times per year 2000.
Secondly, the frequency of Australia children to eat Hamburger in 1975 to 1985 increased dramatically to 83 times per year. Although the children of Australia who consumed Pizza climbed slightly to 83 times per annual in range period time from 1975 to 1995 and leveled out in the last five years. Conversely, the children who ate Hamburger, the frequency rose slightly to 100 times per annual and plateaued during half of a decade.
In conclusion, fast food which contained bread went up and Fish and Chips declined in the period time from 1975 to 2000.
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'Firstly, the frequency of Australia children to consume fast food from 1975 to 1985 fluctuated to 95 times and slumped dramatically to 38 times per year 2000.'
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